Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. I feel great honored to be speaking on behalf of all the camp members. First of all, I’d like to express my sincere thank to all the teachers and host families which have given us a lot of help in life and in study. During past few weeks we have had a wonderful time and achieve a lot. The host parents took care of us, which made us feeling at home. But with the help of the teachers we have made great progress in English. Meanwhile, we have got to know more about western history and culture before seeing so many places of interest. What’s more, the visit to such famous universities as Harvard University and Stanford University that has broadened our horizons.

What they have gained from this camp is not only knowledge, but also friendship. I hope our friendship will last forever. Thank you!

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Today, my friends or I went on our trip to People’s Park, that we had a good time. We arrived at park later because of the traffic jam. First, we rode the roller coaster (过山车), which was really excited. After lunch, we went on the water rides — my most favorite! Although we got so wet, we still feel very delighted. The most unforgettable was several photos take when we were riding the water rides. I had my eyes closed and was screaming with my mouth wide open. By this trip, I feel that proper relaxation can reduce us pressure in life and study.

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Beijing attract tourists all the year around; the best time to visit Beijing is in October. I pay a visit to Beijing for the first time on last Friday. I was there for only one day. Therefore, I was able to see lots of interesting sites and I did have great funs. Hardly had I arrived at the train station then I rented a bike. I rode around the city where colorful ancient temples decorated the streets, among that my favorite site was the Imperial Palace. Night falling and had to work the next day, I had quick dinner in a restaurant and then took the high-speed rail back home. I am dying to return soon for a long visit.