2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It snowed last night, when was quite rare here in Western Washington State. School canceled for the day and the neighborhood kids were so exciting! A couple of my young neighbors knocked polite on my door and asked if they could all play in their courtyard. I was happy to having them and soon they were making snowmen and having snowball fights. I invite them in to have hot cocoa and homemade cookie. The snow didn't last long — it started raining in this afternoon — so I enjoyed seeing the kids have so much fun while it was here!

Today, I saw the funny incident happening outside a grocery shop. Two little kids were playing together happy. One was very fat with a large stomach, which was eating junk food. The other kid reached out or felt his stomach, joking, “See how big your stomach it is, but you are still eating much!” I amused and looked at the other kid. I couldn’t help laugh out as he was much fatter with an even large stomach!

In your opinion, it is no good having too much junk food, which might be to blame on the fatness of children.

When I was young, my family live near a small airport. They were buses that took travelers from the main terminal to their boarding gates. The buses were free of charge and ran back and forth all day long. Not much people considered them fun, except for me. My father and I used to ride it when he didn’t need to work. We would guess when the travelers came from and was going. We enjoyed each other’s company, talk and laughing happily all way. Though the ride didn’t cost a cent, it is one of the most treasuring memory which I have.