Today, at the local convenience store that I work, an elderly man with a guide dog come in. He went to the shelf where there were all kinds of greeting card. He picked up a card, held it up extreme close to his eyes, but struggled to read it. Just as I was about walk over to help him, I found the little girl, who was about ten years old, asking him if he needed help. Before hear his answer, she started to read him almost every single greeting card out loud until the elderly man was smiled. He said, “That’s perfect! His wife will love this one!”

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was decorated it with a lot of Christmas gift. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Both Jim and her parents singing and dancing happily.

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Last Friday, we went to Beijing Survival Island to go on an outing, that left us with a deep impression.

Early in the morning, we gathered the school gate and the school bus takes us there. In the way, we talked and laughed, full of excitement. Upon arrive, we were attracted by various activities and got involved immediate. The monkey bars were really challenging. One of the boys managed to make it with the encouragement of her classmates. I was interested in making cakes. I was being taught to make my first cake on my own! At lunchtime, we sat around, enjoying the delicious food. Everyone had the good time.

We really enjoyed our stay there. Before we left, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable days.