2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listen to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he could become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seems to enjoy every minute of it. Therefore, half a year later, he told his father that he was tired practising the piano. Hear this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listening to music, but it is another thing to perform good by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don’t practise more.”

I went to the countryside to help mine grandparents on the farm on last Sunday. I got up early in the morning and packed my luggages for the trip. On the farm, I helped pick watermelons, tomatoes, but other vegetables. Though it sounded simpler, the work required a lot of efforts. Realizing what hard it was for my grandparents to work in the burning heat, I went out help. I shared this experience with my parents when I came back home. And they were very proudly of me. Now, I deeply understood the truth that labor creates happiness. And I can hardly waited to return to the fields.

Last weekend I together with several classmates paid a visit Yellow Mountain. We set out early in the morning and get to the top of the mountain before the sunrise. Watch the sun rising was really exciting. We both had a good time there. When we wanted to leave, I spotted the backpack. Considering the owner must be very worried, so I decided to wait. With a policeman’s helps, I finally found the owner, a Taiwan tourist. Seen his backpack, he was so delighted that he wanted to give me some money as a reward, but he declined. Exhausted and late for home as I was, I felt more than happier to have helped others.