2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Several days ago, Mother brought home little cat. I named her “Mimi”. She is black all over. Can you imagine how she looks like? Every morning she gets up early than anyone else. Then she climbs on my bed and wake me up. When we are having our meal, she is often runs under the table and even climbs onto our knees. She seems to be saying, “Let me join you. I want nothing to eat.” Mimi likes to lie on the sunshine. She feels comfortably that way. She looks lovely when doing that. I like Mimi very much so she brings our joy.

Feeding birds is a popular way to watch wildlife during the winter months. But many bird experts say the experience is often pleasant for people than for bird. And it might even put wild birds at the risk. They put feeders in places that birds are frightened by foot traffic, risk being hurt by cats, or risk flying into windows. A solution was to put the food in more than one place by using different kind of seeds and feeders. Nyjer seeds, for example, are definite a favorite of goldfinches. Tube feeders with wire covers prevent large birds from entered. Another word of advice: Do not feed wild birds anything salt, like potato chips, or food that could choke them, like plain bread.

But for hummingbirds-which are very, very small-put water on large plant leaves to attract them.

My grandparents live in the countryside. They keep a dog calling Ah Bao. One day my grandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao. My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river. Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water. Hearing about him barking，my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother. Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother，that moved all the people present. Everyone praised Ah Bao for his bravery and kindn.