People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree much. Last Sunday, I woke up very early and decide to take a walk. I found several elders bury in feeding birds in the square, there many people were dancing. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shops were well decorated, which attracted our eyes. The whole city was covered with green trees, making it green city. At this moment, I found the city was pretty well. How I regret ignore its beauty before!

I didn’t always study in my present school. A year ago I study in a country school, where lies in the north of the city. Although very busy with my study, but I went back to my old school last weekend. I saw so wonderful changes there that I was great surprised. It is not what I described in past at all. There is a big football playground among two new teaching building. And beside the playground, there is a little lake with much green plants around it. There is also a nice library next to the lake. If you are interested, going to visit it.

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Alice is writing to provide some advices for Ms Sanders to consider. She suggests that there should be of easy use of the cinema by the disability customers. She is the only one of those designers who are to design the new Bankstown cinema. She asks her to consider the access at the cinema for people in a wheelchair or those who have difficulty walking. She suggests there were earphones beside all seats. Besides, the seats at back of the cinema should be placed higher than the one at the front. There should be toilet and car parking spaces specially for the disabled. If so, it will be much more easier for the disabled there.