As a child I always wanted to become a doctor. Ikept my dreams throughout primary school and middle school. When I admitted to a medical college, I was very exciting. After years of study I graduated and entered a children's hospital. I worked hard and soon became a experienced doctor. I did not get married with until I was over thirty. I worked during the day and after work enjoyed life with my family. In the age of 60 I retire, but I often helped young doctors when they needed me. You don't worry too much about my health problem. I believe that I don't care about them, they won't hurt me. So I am still health and happy today.

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My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

As is known to all that we students have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. Neither that we have learned in books nor in class can have the same important effect on us as what we have learned through personally practice. In social practice, we can surely make a rapid progress in both knowledge and practical ability. However, when we take part-time jobs, we may get paid more or less to help our families. Thus, I suggested we senior school students should take part-time jobs in our holiday, if possible.